shann
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Life is an occasion; rise to it. And don't forget to hoist the colours
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Post by shann on Dec 1, 2007 9:57:44 GMT -5
Hey: this is a really old poem that I wrote. And I just feel like putting it in here, cause some of ya'll have read it before. But I'm not saying anything else about it--like who it's about and when I wrote it; AND SOME OF YA"LL SHOULDNT EITHER!!
Weird, Absolute weird. Really not sure how this came to be, But here it is... And here I stand.
In no way can this truly work, But there's something about him, I should be disgusted, freaked, and annoyed But I'm not. And my heart wants him.
For some silly reason, I've come to see a light and shining in his eyes, An innocense about his smile And humor as he tries to trip me up It's rather odd.
I get drawn into his eyes, Those deep, loning, and engaging eyes. And I melt at his smile, His weird and strangely cute smile. Somebody rescue me!
Alas, this is my strange tale of love The weirdest thing I shall ever know. Strange, yet embarassing yet true. Ah! Why is love so odd and out of things? Why can't love make sense?
When he's just with me, He calms down, becoming soft and gentle, And is my lover. Being a sweet guy my heart can touch, And a soft something I can melt away with/
Something says "Don't love him" But my heart can't help, but can. You do not see this as I do, but If you saw him the way I do, you'd Trip and fall into the trap your heart sets.
So, that's it. Really weird and quite embarassing. But I liked it, so...it's here.
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Post by Jordan on Dec 3, 2007 21:48:02 GMT -5
Wait, when did you write it? It's very nice tho, lol.
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shann
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Life is an occasion; rise to it. And don't forget to hoist the colours
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Post by shann on Dec 4, 2007 16:27:31 GMT -5
I wrote it sometime---maybe last year...maybe before. I dunno? ? I dunno if you read it--wait I think you did, actually.
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Post by Vici on Dec 4, 2007 18:16:23 GMT -5
I REMEMBER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HA HA!!!!!!!!!! I know who it's about!!!! I know something other people don't know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHA again!!
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stephie
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Bother!!!
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Post by stephie on Dec 5, 2007 18:36:42 GMT -5
yay yay yay...who cares....um..not ME!!!
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Post by Vici on Jan 19, 2008 18:21:39 GMT -5
*posts on old forum for the heck of it*
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